But there is another reason as well. The expressions in this group have
been so weakened by constant repetition that they have lost their power
of exhortation. Thus when they are needed—that is, when their sense is
really intended—they carry no force. They have degenerated into tedious
formulas to which the reader no longer pays any attention.
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母江文卓
In these examples the phrases "make great efforts to", "pay attention to", "do a good job in" are used indiscriminately, without logical necessity. And because they are not needed, they only clutter up the sentence and obscure its point. For that reason alone they should be eliminated.

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